tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post3031413298148332255..comments2024-01-26T04:47:22.780-05:00Comments on A Mused Writer: Share Your Darlings BlogfestKristie Cookhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01649966564896771373noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-9724436749449024352010-07-01T12:04:22.211-04:002010-07-01T12:04:22.211-04:00great description, sweet scene. sweet, kind of sad...great description, sweet scene. sweet, kind of sad last line. <br><br>thanks for participating.Michelle Gregoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-2066477437169582912010-07-01T14:20:09.870-04:002010-07-01T14:20:09.870-04:00You got me hooked! Love the last line, too.You got me hooked! <br><br>Love the last line, too.Talli Rolandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-76895461506964670632010-07-01T14:34:31.486-04:002010-07-01T14:34:31.486-04:00That is a very sweet scene. Anything with motorcyc...That is a very sweet scene. Anything with motorcycles makes me think of helmets and shouldn't the characters be wearing them, lol. But I love the part at the table with the drawing and crayons. The characters seem very interesting, though her spunk doesn't show through as much in this particular scene. They're both worth reading, either way.Dawn Embershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-59515803094825887252010-07-01T15:08:58.782-04:002010-07-01T15:08:58.782-04:00Very intruiging scene...makes me wonder why she pa...Very intruiging scene...makes me wonder why she panics at the thought of trusting someone. Is it because he's dangerous...or her own past.Raquel Byrneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-24229591646273264152010-07-01T17:10:51.235-04:002010-07-01T17:10:51.235-04:00Nice. Thanks for sharing.Nice. Thanks for sharing.E. Arroyohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-87237148681025049092010-07-01T21:47:09.591-04:002010-07-01T21:47:09.591-04:00Great scene. I liked the hole-in-the-wall bar scen...Great scene. I liked the hole-in-the-wall bar scene..:)L'Aussiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-39961993271629610342010-07-01T22:18:44.600-04:002010-07-01T22:18:44.600-04:00Great build up here. I'm a cynic; when I read...Great build up here. I'm a cynic; when I read a scene like this I think its either from a sappy romance, or something really bad is about to happen in the next couple scenes.<br><br>........dholeDonna Holehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-75623259502471794822010-07-02T10:32:49.962-04:002010-07-02T10:32:49.962-04:00This is sweet and comforting, but with that little...This is sweet and comforting, but with that little warning that all is not perfect to give it a little tension. I loved that part where you said she realized she had put her life in another's hands - well done! (I remember that feeling too when I rode behind someone on a bike the first time!) Tristan's crayon portraits are a great touch, too. <br><br>Hope you can stop and see my darling, too.Margo Berendsenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03476308235642890474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-42646320497718523002010-11-03T19:49:00.057-04:002010-11-03T19:49:00.057-04:00reading this again, after reading the book, i can ...reading this again, after reading the book, i can see why you had to cut it, but i still think it's sweet. can you tell i'm bored today?Michelle Gregoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3020141552150561814.post-55435893707823244332010-11-03T19:57:26.289-04:002010-11-03T19:57:26.289-04:00Bored? Michelle, I think the right word is "p...Bored? Michelle, I think the right word is "procrastinating." LOL Aren't you supposed to be writing? Hmmm????Kristie Cookhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01649966564896771373noreply@blogger.com